The blog titled "giving it a deeper dive" was all about our second phase of the module ie. the week 3 onwards.
When it comes to critically appreciate the blog post, I went through the blog carefully and found there were no spelling errors although there were minute errors such as:
1) "gave us clear direction" instead of "gave us a direction"
2) "this module not only taught me" instead of "this module taught me not only"
3) "highly cooperative" instead of "super cooperative"
4) "after one week' instead of "after a week"
I personally feel that the post is effecting enough in communicating the original thoughts that I had when I began writing the blog post.
This is because each paragraph of the post clearly tells the reader about the process of our research, like the first paragraph tells the reader about the objective of the coming week, second paragraph talks about the work done up-till week 2, third paragraph is about my individualistic learning though out and the fourth and fifth paragraph conclude the post by telling the reader about how and what things are about to come in the coming weeks.
Overall I feel that the blog is on an average as a whole. The title does enough justice to the content of the post as it talks 'deeply' about the further activities of the module.
When it comes to critically appreciate the blog post, I went through the blog carefully and found there were no spelling errors although there were minute errors such as:
1) "gave us clear direction" instead of "gave us a direction"
2) "this module not only taught me" instead of "this module taught me not only"
3) "highly cooperative" instead of "super cooperative"
4) "after one week' instead of "after a week"
I personally feel that the post is effecting enough in communicating the original thoughts that I had when I began writing the blog post.
This is because each paragraph of the post clearly tells the reader about the process of our research, like the first paragraph tells the reader about the objective of the coming week, second paragraph talks about the work done up-till week 2, third paragraph is about my individualistic learning though out and the fourth and fifth paragraph conclude the post by telling the reader about how and what things are about to come in the coming weeks.
Overall I feel that the blog is on an average as a whole. The title does enough justice to the content of the post as it talks 'deeply' about the further activities of the module.
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